Thursday, January 26, 2012

Weather/Seasons

1. In fact, Seattle has to much rain. Therefore, people always bring an umbrella when people go to work.
2. I like summer. For this reason, I can eat ice cream a lot.
3. When summer begins, children not only can go to the beach, but also have a long vacation.
4. I love snow days. However, it is very cold.
5. I like to stay home all day when it starts to snow.
6. My mother likes flowers. For instance, I must go out with my mother when spring begins.
7. My friend likes to go shopping on sunny days.
8. It had been raining since my mother was staying.
9. My father and I always swim when the weather is very hot.
10. Many people don't like to go to school if the weather is really bad.

1 comment:

  1. #3 s-v agreement (2 mistakes)
    #4 plural mistake
    #5 Change "the weather" to it (S-V)
    #6 two verbs?
    #7 just one day?
    Change "Seattle" to it, also verb tense.

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